Unanswered [2]
  

Home / Scholarship % width   Posts: 3


limited access to information - GKS Future plan + Goal of study



ali333 2 / 1  
Feb 26, 2025   #1
Please is this enough or I have to extend it?? Someone please

One pressing challenge in xxxxxxxx is the limited access to information due to language barriers and underdeveloped digital infrastructure. I aim to develop AI-powered Sxxxxlia language processing tools that can be applied in education, healthcare, and public services, ensuring vital information is accessible to wider communities. Korea's advanced technological landscape, combined with its emphasis on AI and data-driven solutions, makes it an ideal environment for me to acquire the knowledge and skills necessary to achieve this goal.

Upon completing my graduate studies, my immediate goal is to return to xxxxxxxx and contribute to the country's technological development. I plan to collaborate with local organizations and tech communities, such as xxxxxxxxx, to launch projects that address critical needs, including developing AI-powered systems for agriculture to combat drought and enhance food security.

I also envision how this experience could strengthen the relationship between xxxx and Korea, fostering collaborations that benefit both nations. By giving back for this once-in-a-lifetime opportunity, I aim to create long-term value for my profession and my country, building bridges for future partnerships in technology and education. My long-term goal is to establish the xxxxxxx's Tech Institute, which will focus on using technology, data, and artificial intelligence to drive community development, addressing real-world challenges through practical, community-focused innovations.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15585  
Feb 27, 2025   #2
You have redacted so much important information in your essay that I cannot truly say if you have provided enough information or not for the reviewer to consider your response complete. At first glance, your essay seems too short Bo provide a proper future plan + goal of study. I would advise you to expand the discussion based on that observation. With the GKS scholarship, the reviewers prefer that you give thorough explanations based on the writing guide. They need to fully understand your response based on the information that you will be writing about. I am not sure what else I can say about your essay since you blacked out information so much, I do not know where your response is headed or what it is based upon. I can only guess and offer what I hope is related advice.
annhien66677 3 / 3  
Mar 1, 2025   #3
@ali333

You could provide more specific details about the graduate program you plan to pursue in Korea and how your background prepares you for this study and future plans


Home / Scholarship / limited access to information - GKS Future plan + Goal of study
ⓘ Need Writing or Editing Help?
Fill out one of these forms for professional help:

Best Writing Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳