"self-introduction letter for master degree in finance" - the major is international relations

Hi everyone, hope you are doing well, i would like you guys to take a look my self-introduction letter that ii will match for the scholarship or not,my major is international relations and the program is open for all major

kindly thanks, i do not know how to start the essay

hard study for best future

I grew up in bad conditions which made me out of information of the world. Moreover I am a local people and I was born in low family income so I have to move to the town to earn money. I am always relocated until now but I am happy to pass everything with my parents.

When I was 17, my parents were nearly break up because of money. The conflict between my parents hurt me so much. All bad words and angry voice stuck in my mind for a week. It made me realize that money seems to be the big problem for everyone. My parents show me how important money is. The pain gives me the power and inspiration to move on. I told myself to solve the money family problem and I will never let it happen with my parents again. This year I support money to myself by selling lottery which it can made me through this bad situation. I spend all days and nights to study hard to make my best future. The result of my work hard made me become the second place of the best student in physical subject and I can get the good score in final year of high school. The most important of mine is I can entrance to medical major which it is very hard for other students.

I do not know the reason why I choose to study International Relations even though I can entrance in 3 majors. For no reason, I find myself what I want to do in the future. I spend 4 years to study and being a volunteer for many programs both of private and government, which made me love to serve the society. I intend to work with the government, international Organizations and Social Units in terms of helping people to get out of poverty and lack of education for better life. To be a volunteer both in school and out of school made me to understand more about the society for example hosting the ASEAN Summit of Lao PDR, Job Fairs, Protection environment and helping no education children. I keep my plan in mind that after I graduate I will apply to the United Nations to be the part of the program for helping local people in Laos. To make my dream come true I enter into many programs for getting more knowledge and be prepare to match for the job. I join in many events and courses to practice my English and apply to be the leader of the Environment Protection Group. Two years in the group developed me a lot in terms of making fund proposal for holding activities, Planed the budget, coordinated with supporter, improved the members management systems and transfer environmental knowledge to children. I want to manage the project so I will take the accountant training course for being a budget planner for organization projects.

In my university years, I use all of opportunities for working in many positions in order to reducing the payments of the family. All of careers of mine started from worker and step forward to be office staff. Working at noodle factory made me deeply understand how hard to earn money even one kip. I have to leave home at five, spend 3 hours in hot weather and use more energy every day for a kip of money. Then I was a waitress at the restaurant. I learned a lot how to communicate to customers. The waitress not seems to difference from worker in noodle factory, the better is no working out door to face the hot weather. I feel that last two jobs not give me the skills that useful for my future job, so I apply to be sale at the book shop. I work at foreign book shop which I develop my English conversations and update news every day by reading newspapers and magazines. It was the best job I ever do, but I leave this job after I worked only 4 months. The most important of me is study so I leave the job for using all times with my final year at the university. I am not stop to find the best job for myself during waiting for bachelor diploma. I work at the Chinese Buying Company as the office staff until now.

Four years of studying at university, working experiences and being a volunteer made me know the living of society. Everyone have to do everything and catch up with opportunities in front of them to survive in the competition world. As myself, I have to do whatever I can to make my family income better. I want to with organization for helping others but it is no evidence that if I do all of my lists so I will be as the lists. So it is not surely that after I graduate I will get the job at the organization. Until I found out the 2018 NKFUST x Cathay United Bank International Master Scholarship Program.

I am very glad to apply for 2018 National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology X Cathay United Bank International Master's Scholarship Program. A couple of reasons motivate me to apply for a Master's degree study in finance. Firstly, when I attended my undergraduate study I took hard work for communications skills, both verbally and orally, an analytical and logical approach to problem solving, sensitivity and integrity yet assertive in presentation to make the good scores in Logical and International economic. I often spend most of my work time on reading and watching different journals, articles, papers, videos and television about economic as a whole and specifically on its impact in International economic. It made me feel comfortable to use my skills in financial system. The master curriculum in finance at institute of technology, National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology, Taiwan introduces me to a wide variety of finance subjects. Various courses like investment mgmt seminar, Fin mgmt, Fin markets, Fin statement analysis, International finance & foreign exchange, Acct topic seminar and Chinese language class provided me with a strong footing in the theoretical concept of finance. And the program will provide me to intern at the Cathay United Bank which is the Taiwan's largest financial. I am much eager to adopt and know financial course. I am really enthusiastic to attend a Master of finance in order to understand different finance systems, because every countries have technical to holding finance. I strongly believe that my educational qualification and motive towards the subject matter makes me a suitable candidate for your program. Moreover, I feel I am responsible for making a big move in this field and this scholarship will give me a big chance to be the leader of the CUB's branch in my own town.

It is well-known that Taiwan is f the best East Asia's economic where there are a number of best universities. My desire to pursue my master degree in Taiwan because of its outstanding educational system with full support of the international students and the friendly atmosphere at both the university as well as the city. Studying at National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology in Taiwan will offers opportunities for professional networking, and will be my collaboration partner in the future. Besides, from my early age, I am highly interested to know the culture and norms of Taiwan people. Indeed, it is true, there is no other program that meets my need like 2018 National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology X Cathay United Bank International Master's Scholarship Program, since it provides detailed of opportunity for student to expend knowledge of finance in NKFUST and to apply theoretical knowledge into actual practice in the best financial holdings in Taiwan like CUB. I appreciate your time and it will be a great honor for me to be a Master's student at National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology.

for the beginning part you have to add more details about yourself such as your ability for doing something

Chith, a letter of self introduction needs to accomplish a number of tasks in order to be deemed a proper introduction. First, you have to discuss the kind of positive influence that your parents had upon you, even in the face of financial difficulties. Talking about too much personal information that presents your parents and the way they brought you up in a negative light is not going to help your application. Second, your presentation of the development of your work ethic is good but runs too long. A letter of introduction should be no longer than 5 paragraphs and does not discuss the reasons why you think you make for a good candidate for the scholarship. Instead, after you present a summarized version (one paragraph) of your work ethic, you can move on to discussing why you chose a particular university for your masters degree. From there, explain that you are a working student who is keen on paying your way through the course but you need the help the scholarship to do that. Simply imply an inference to the financial situation of your family and that it will bring the family great pride if you graduate from the course on your own merit. Introduce yourself as a hard working person who doesn't take studies for granted and therefore, you are hoping to be considered for the scholarship. Remember, don't go past 5 paragraphs. The reviewer doesn't have time to read more than 5 paragraphs per student letter. If you can highlight just your positive traits as a student, professional, and person, with very little reference to your family situation, the letter will be better received by the reviewer.

@Holt, Thanks a lot for take a look my letter and give me great advices, i want you to tell me how my self letter should look like. you said that no longer than 5 paragraphs and write it in positive way. for all they want are

o Your course of life, your view of life, study background, your hopes & wishes, etc
o Your education and work experience, etc.
o Your motivations for applying for this program
o Reasons for studying in Taiwan
and The letter must be single spaced within TWO page.
what should i do?
thanks for your kindness

Here is my revise, please help me to find out the best one, thanks

Moving is an activity of mine. Since I was five, I had to move to the town with my parents. Then next five years I moved to new house. My parents have to find the better place for earn money. Until now I am 21 and my parents told me that we have to move again. I understand why we have to move for our family income. My older sister and brother got married and move to another place. I live in the house with my parents and my younger sister. She is just 10. So I have to do everything to help my parents as I am an older child. My mother leave home at 4 PM and come back at 21 PM for selling food at the market as well as my father. My father is a truck driver. He always go out to another provinces and I just meet him twice a month. I take care both of my mother and my younger sister when my father go out. We are not get in touch too much but we are a warmly family when we are together. I need my family to live together and no more moving, so I make myself to be hard working person and pay attention to study. The result of my work hard made me become the second place of the best student in physical subject and I can get the good score in final year of high school. I have communication skills since I was child and I am very happy to help others for giving advices and being good listener. So I choose to study international Relations which I can use my skills to help others, make new foreign friends and learning new things in society.

In my university years, I join in many events and courses to practice my English and apply to be the leader of the Environment Protection Group. Two years in the group developed me a lot in terms of making fund proposal for holding activities, Planed the budget, coordinated with supporter, improved the members management systems and transfer environmental knowledge to children. I am very happy to help children to get deep understand about environment. At the same time I use all of opportunities for working in various careers in order to reducing the payments of the family. All of careers of mine started from worker and step forward to be an office staff. Working at noodle factory made me deeply understand how hard to earn money even one kip. I have to leave home at five, spend 3 hours in hot weather and use more energy every day for a kip of money. Then I was a waitress at the restaurant. I learned a lot how to communicate to customers. The waitress not seems to difference from worker in the noodle factory, the better is no working out door to face the hot weather. Last two jobs not give me enough money for payments, thus I apply to be a sale at the book shop. I work at foreign book shop which I develop my English conversations and get the better money. It was the best job I ever do, but I leave this job after I worked only 4 months. The most important of me is study so I leave the job for using all times with my final year at the university.

All of careers experiences provide me to be stronger for adapting in pressure situation and solving problems. My parents are the model for hard working person who never give up for life. I keep following as my parents to keep learning new thing which challenges or difficulties. I am not let's the time to past me by so I apply to work at the Company as the office staff until now during waiting for my bachelor diploma. As my attention for support my family income and helping others, I need to take more courses which it can enhance my degree. With international relations degree and accountant will make me reach my goal to help others. I will do the budget plan for free helping organizations in my country so I find out the scholarship to help me to get deep understand in accountant. As I know from my study that Taiwan is the best economy in Asia for finance and when I know that Taiwan's scholarship is opened, it realized me to get the best opportunity to enhance my higher education in Taiwan.

I am very glad to apply for 2018 National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology X Cathay United Bank International Master's Scholarship Program. I am much eager to adopt and know financial course. The master curriculum in finance at institute of technology, National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology, Taiwan introduces me to a wide variety of finance subjects. Various courses like investment mgmt seminar, Fin mgmt, Fin markets, Fin statement analysis, International finance & foreign exchange, Acct topic seminar and Chinese language class provided with a strong footing in the theoretical concept of finance. Special thing is the program will provide to intern at the Cathay United Bank which is the Taiwan's largest financial. I am really enthusiastic to attend a Master of finance and I strongly believe that my educational qualification and motive towards the subject matter makes me a suitable candidate for your program. Moreover, I feel I am responsible for making a big move in this field and this scholarship will give me a big chance to be the leader of the CUB's branch in my own town. The most important thing is my family income will better when I get this scholarship.

It is well-known that Taiwan is the best East Asia's economic where (....)

I appreciate your time and it will be a great honor for me to be a Master's student at National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology. This scholarship will make a significant and positive impact on my ability to work with you in the future. I hope that you will acknowledge my interest and will give me a chance to study in the Asia Top University like National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology in Taiwan. I would like to thank you in advance for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing positive respond.