I'm not the best essay writer I must admit so don't afraid to be pretty blunt with your critiquing.
The Ohio State University, why wouldn't I want to go there? I haven't even been on my college visit to the Columbus campus yet and I'm already excited to think about the possibility of attending it in the fall of 2011. Every year, during their last performance, the kids in my symphonic band are announced in front of the office and our conductor says what college they plan on attending. Every year the kids that are attending "The Ohio State University" get the loudest and longest rounds of applause. Our school has so much respect for The Ohio State University that our director always makes there is extra emphasis on the 'The'. I want to go there because I've never heard anything negative from my fellow coworkers who return from there on their breaks. In fact, they can't wait to get back on the campus as soon as possible. I want to go there because when I am doing other visits to college something in the back of my head is telling me that no matter what this school has to offer, that OSU can do it just as well and most of the time even better. I want to find myself a part of the intense spirit that I can feel emanating from the campus. I can just hope that when it is my turn to get announced that my name gets followed by a proud, "... this fall he shall be attending The Ohio State University."
The Ohio State University, why wouldn't I want to go there? I haven't even been on my college visit to the Columbus campus yet and I'm already excited to think about the possibility of attending it in the fall of 2011. Every year, during their last performance, the kids in my symphonic band are announced in front of the office and our conductor says what college they plan on attending. Every year the kids that are attending "The Ohio State University" get the loudest and longest rounds of applause. Our school has so much respect for The Ohio State University that our director always makes there is extra emphasis on the 'The'. I want to go there because I've never heard anything negative from my fellow coworkers who return from there on their breaks. In fact, they can't wait to get back on the campus as soon as possible. I want to go there because when I am doing other visits to college something in the back of my head is telling me that no matter what this school has to offer, that OSU can do it just as well and most of the time even better. I want to find myself a part of the intense spirit that I can feel emanating from the campus. I can just hope that when it is my turn to get announced that my name gets followed by a proud, "... this fall he shall be attending The Ohio State University."