Why are you selecting this major?
From the time i started Chemistry in 10th grade, it has been my favorite subject. I find it fascinating that most things around us revolve around chemistry. I also love that there are so many different fields of chemistry such as: forensic chemistry, cosmetic chemistry and my favorite Pharmacy. Majoring in Chemistry will allow me to become prepared for a career in Pharmacy.
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From the time i started Chemistry in 10th grade, it has been my favorite subject. I find it fascinating that most things around us revolve around chemistry. I also love that there are so many different fields of chemistry such as: forensic chemistry, cosmetic chemistry and my favorite Pharmacy. Majoring in Chemistry will allow me to become prepared for a career in Pharmacy.
Is the grammar correct or are there some mistakes?