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Computing: what led you to select both your anticipated academic area of study



silkesha2 3 / 5  
Dec 25, 2010   #1
Please tell us what led you to select both your anticipated academic area(s) of study and the NYU school / college / program or the Abu Dhabi campus. What interests you most about your intended discipline? Mention any extracurricular or non-school-related activities or experiences that demonstrate your interest.

Computing is part of everything we do! It is not just confined to a particular set of subjects but also draws upon ideas from other disciplines. What caught my eye to a greater extent was how naturally it fits into the enchanting world of liberal arts to an extent that it is now considered as the ultimate of the liberal arts disciplines. The research that I have performed in various aspects of this discipline has led me into believing that this field is not just about numbers, but insight. NYUAD, I believe, would be the perfect place to help me in my quest of attaining knowledge of both: the algorithmic world as well as life, the supreme of all.

The character limit is 500...and I've gone way beyond the limit- 654! Kindly provide some feedback and help me in reducing the number of characters or the size of the answer. Thank you!

abebek 1 / 2  
Dec 25, 2010   #2
Just one advice, I think you forget to put the answer for the last prompt about extracurricular activities you involved in to strengthen your interest.
OP silkesha2 3 / 5  
Dec 25, 2010   #3
I did--"research"...is it not visible? I mean...please do let me know...so that I'll make changes to it!
Thank you! :)
AngelofLogic 5 / 9  
Dec 25, 2010   #4
I know the limit is small, but I would specify your "research" because it shows you didn't just write a generic answer, but one that is more personal and shows you actually did something.

and "I believe, would be the perfect place to help me in my quest of attaining knowledge of both: the algorithmic world as well as life, the supreme of all. " I feel is a waste of valuable characters, if you need to cut anything out.
OP silkesha2 3 / 5  
Dec 25, 2010   #5
by 'visible'...I meant to ask whether it is clear enough or not...Thanks!
piggie 2 / 2  
Dec 26, 2010   #6
Take the I Believe out to make your arguement stronger,
and voila <500 :)


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