'Cycling' - Extracurricular activity

One of my extracurricular activities that I am going to evaluate is cycling. I've been cycling since I was small and I have no intentions of stopping any time soon. What I adore about cycling is that it provides me with the opportunity to relax and release the heat from a busy day. I can just take my bike out and start cycling. With my bike, I can explore every part of my city without being stuck in traffic jams. However, I like to cycle in parks and mountains the most. They are places that enables me to take a break from the busy city and they bring joy as well as appreciation of nature . When riding my bike I am in a state of joy and happiness. I let go of all my worries and problems and I can simply feel the pleasure of what I am doing. Like other sports, cycling keeps me fit and helps me to lose weight.

Thank you in advance! :)

Tran


Okay, colleges wanna know how cycling has affected YOU as an individual and what you can bring to the school community through cycling.
For example: Cycling has gotten me physically fit and has helped with how I organize thought as a result of having so much free time to just think.

Not a serious example, but by saying something like that colleges will know you think things through. Don't know if you understand that but yeah.

Secondly, maybe you could talk about a cycling club you joined or a race you participated in or something. Also you could have a little anecdote about cycling.

Otherwise you kind of spent a lot of time on the fact that cycling provides release, you can probably cut down on that and talk about what I mentioned above.

Hope this helps!

I could not agree more ...
I think you should mention how cycling makes you as an individual, and how it will help you to achieve other objectives, and you could also mention that you attended any club or would like to attend