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BU has diverse students body ; BU suppl_ why BU is a good fit ?



earth 2 / 4  
Dec 26, 2012   #1
hi,all. application is due on Jan 1st, plz help me.
essay topic and requirement:
Essay 1: In no more than 250 words, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission?

Hindus view cow as god; there are restrict order of older and younger in Korea; thumbs up has an pejorative meaning in Iran; in China, many buildings have no 4th floor, because of the taboo of number 4, but Chinese people like number 8 and 6. Learning different cultures makes me realize how big the world is and how unique each person is. Attaching importance to the diversity makes BU stand out from other universities. As one of the most diverse universities, BU has diverse students body with myriad of background and ethnicity and more than 5000 international students, I cannot wait to see the sparks of collision of ideas. Also I would have great opportunities to broaden my horizon and prepare myself in global competition. "Hello! Hola! Hallo! Bonjour! ă"ă‚"にづ! ě-ˆë...-í-˜ě„¸ěš"! ä˝ ĺĽ˝!" I can hear the greetings from BU.

After working at a medical instruments development company, I was more determined to become an engineer, but I also realized having only professional knowledge is not enough, mastering other skills like entrepreneurship is also crucial. With well-known business programs and Boston area as strong support, BU offers innovative programs that teach engineering students entrepreneurial skills and provide student with limitless job opportunities. The social engineers from BU are making differences.

one more question, Can common app show eastern Asian characters? it seems can, just want to make sure
thanks!

yycho0426 5 / 13  
Dec 26, 2012   #2
Essay seems unconnected. Too much description at first.
lm24601 1 / 4  
Dec 26, 2012   #3
I think the descriptions in the beginning seemed interesting but may too much.
One problem I find is that cultural diversity and your engineering interest do not connect very well.
I know there are word limits but including a personal experience learning the importance of cultural diversity would make it better.
I hope this helped you
OP earth 2 / 4  
Dec 27, 2012   #4
can you tell me how to connect those two points?


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