Ever since grade school, I have always had an opinion, an unusual sense of humor and a desire not to have the usual school experience. Therefore, my passions are centered on trying to understand our strange world
^How does having an opinion, or having an unusual sense of experience, or even not having the usual school experience, imply that your passions are understanding the strange world?
My easily excitable nature and unique outlook on life are some of the reasons I am known for my eccentricity.
^How is your outlook on life unique? Many people are funny. Many people have opinions. Many people do not have the usual school experience. (For example, the class clown is funny, has his own opinions and may not have the usual school experience due to detentions or expulsions, whatever). The class clown can also think want to understand the strange world. No, I think your use of the word 'unique' is way too flattering.
I have an absurd sense of humor which is often the source of my spastic creativity
^Absurd humor can also be really inappropriate and really unfunny jokes. Neither of these attribute to creativity. In my opinion at least.
I bring abnormal intensity into my activities such as musical performance, public speaking, or simply reading before bed
^How can you bring abnormal intensity to reading before bed? I assume, that you are already in bed and reading a book. Does not seem to be too intense.
I can see that from then on, you have decided to ramble. I admit that I have stopped reading the essay, and that perhaps is something that should concern you, because as a reader I have lost interest. You are not getting to the point. How will your three qualities contribute to BU's diversity.