Hi. I need advice on this short answer I just wrote. Thanks!
prompt: What is your favorite ride at the amusement park? How does this reflect your approach to life?
answer:
My life is like the rollercoaster "Hulk" in Orlando. There are constantly ups and downs that I can never foresee. These turns constantly catch me when I am least expecting it, thus completely changing my mental state of mind. In fact, there are times when I feel overwhelmed by the speed of life, thus giving me "butterflies" in my stomach. To top it all off, just when I think I cannot get lower, there is another dip in my life. Yet, after what seems like days, I fight to pull myself back up. Slowly I get to the point when I am at the peak of my game; this is the time when I feel invincible. Life all of a sudden looks like a straight path, yet there is another dramatic fall and sometimes a complete 360 degree turnaround. It seems like a never ending cycle.
Yet, in its totality, this ride has helped to shape my personal outlook. Though I may not be able to see what will happen to me in the next couple of days or years, I will continue to have my seat belt buckled, ready for another year of life.
Yeah, not really sure if this is any good. Suggestions?
prompt: What is your favorite ride at the amusement park? How does this reflect your approach to life?
answer:
My life is like the rollercoaster "Hulk" in Orlando. There are constantly ups and downs that I can never foresee. These turns constantly catch me when I am least expecting it, thus completely changing my mental state of mind. In fact, there are times when I feel overwhelmed by the speed of life, thus giving me "butterflies" in my stomach. To top it all off, just when I think I cannot get lower, there is another dip in my life. Yet, after what seems like days, I fight to pull myself back up. Slowly I get to the point when I am at the peak of my game; this is the time when I feel invincible. Life all of a sudden looks like a straight path, yet there is another dramatic fall and sometimes a complete 360 degree turnaround. It seems like a never ending cycle.
Yet, in its totality, this ride has helped to shape my personal outlook. Though I may not be able to see what will happen to me in the next couple of days or years, I will continue to have my seat belt buckled, ready for another year of life.
Yeah, not really sure if this is any good. Suggestions?