jbuddenberg 2 / 3 Jan 13, 2015 #1We imagine you have spent a great deal of time researching different colleges and universities. How did you identify GW as a strong fit with your interests, talents, and goals? (250w limit)-----I founded my first own company at age 15; my main inspiration was the grey city I live in. Simply wanting to lighten it up a little, I started selling self-designed neon bracelets - the venture didn't only turn into a respectable local establishment with an own fashion collection and big events - more importantly for myself, I was able to find my passion and since then it has determined how I think about my future.GW offers individuals with a creative business-oriented talent like me the best options imaginable. It will support me with a network that can only be found at an institution with a cosmopolitan outlook, not flatlined but forthcoming in regards of realization of ideas. What the location in the heart of D.C. sets forth, GW greatly extends forward through the Office of Entrepreneurship. Also, the options given by cooperating programs like the Dolphin Tank or Pitch George leave me sitting on the edge of my chair; it's the kind of commitment to the future of students I've been searching for.I will be highly inspired to contribute to the startup spirit at GW with both the beliefs of my own heritage as well as newfound experiences - only the clashing of beliefs will set forth new ideas. While other universities may as well have a diverse and acutely engaged student body offering this potential, GW promises to let its students live up to the potential they have - supporting them from day one; from the very idea to the Fortune 500.-----What do you think of my approach? Are there any spelling and grammar issues left? I'm not a native!!Also, I have to cut down on 3 words? Which would you choose?Thank you in advance :))
miraheta 5 / 10 1 Jan 14, 2015 #2only the clashing of beliefsthe contrast in beliefs will set forth new ideasWhile other universities may as well have aalso be diverse
