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"I won't give up on us even if the skies get rough" ; SMITH College - Theme song



justchamp 1 / 2  
Jan 15, 2013   #1
Applying to college can be serious business; yet we're eager to get to know you in a less formal way. Have fun answering the following question: If you had a theme song - a piece of music that describes you best - what would it be and why? Please include the name of the song and the artist.

"I won't give up on us even if the skies get rough" from Jason Mras' I won't give up would be the best song depicting me. There is no way that someone can never fail in life, however, it is your strength that makes a turn. I am passionate and I never give up. In the past I have challenged myself into doing things nobody ever thought I could accomplish, it has always been the thought of wanting to try again and try harder that made me finish those seemingly impossible goals. The line "I'm tough enough" is always what I say to myself when I start to doubt my own abilities. Whenever there is a chance for me I would try my best. It is always better to try and fail than to regret you that you have lost the chance. I am maybe not born a genius but I am always completing the 99% to become one.

thaonguyen1901 10 / 25  
Jan 15, 2013   #2
There is no way that someone can never fail in life, however, it is your strength that makes a turn.

No one never fails in life. However, it is your strength that makes a turn. That is my philosophy of life.

I am passionate and I never give up.

I feel this redundant.

In the past I have challenged myself into doing things nobody ever thought I could accomplish, it has always been the thought of wanting to try again and try harder that made me finish those seemingly impossible goals.

It is kind of general. Can you give an example to specify how you overcome a challenge in the past?
OP justchamp 1 / 2  
Jan 15, 2013   #3
Thank you thaonguyen1901!!!
I did very bad in middle school and went to a mid-tier high school, and I later changed to a very selective high school (which was a complete surprise for everyone).

The word limit is 150 so I really don't know where to fit it.
katev 18 / 111  
Jan 15, 2013   #4
Jason Mras'

Jason Mraz

I won't give up would be the best song depicting me.

"I Won't Give Up" best describe me. (I would suggest saying something a little more meaningful other than that the song "depicts" you)

There is no way that someone can never fail in life, however, it is your strength that makes a turn.

Failure in life is inevitable. However, it is one's strength to not give up that ______

In the past I have challenged myself into doing things nobody ever thought I could accomplish, it has always been the thought of wanting to try again and try harder that made me finish those seemingly impossible goals.

I agree that you should at least mention one trial/tribulation you faced if that's the main subject of your essay. "I always challenge myself, like the time when ____. Even when I initially fail to succeed, it is my perseverance that helps me reach my seemingly impossible goals.

The line "I'm tough enough" is always what I say to myself when I start to doubt my own abilities.

Upon facing doubt, I can turn to the lyric "I am tough enough" to keep myself going/to motivate myself.

I am maybe not born a genius but I am always completing the 99% to become one.

Where does this 99% come from?
OP justchamp 1 / 2  
Jan 15, 2013   #5
The 99% is from Edison's "Genius: one percent inspiration and 99 percent perspiration."

I always challenge myself, like the time when I tried to go to my current high school. While I was a below average student in middle school and failed to gain admission to my current high school, I eventually tried again and got in. Even when I initially fail to succeed, it is my perseverance that helps me reach my seemingly impossible goals.


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