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Describe the world you come from; for example, your family, clubs, school, community, city, or town. how has that world shaped your dreams and aspirations?(*) (200-250 words)
I have practically lived my whole life in the Fauji Fertilizer Company Township which is a small industrial community on the outskirts of a small city. Although growing up in a remote gated community has sheltered me from the rigors of city life, it has imbued me with a drive to get out into the world to broaden my horizons and meet new people.
My family means the world to me and I live every day to make my parents proud. My father has been an inspiring personality in my life. In 2001 he underwent kidney transplant surgery. From my father I have learnt that whenever life throws you a curve ball, face it with a smile on your face. My mother has taught me the importance of finding balance between school, friends and family.
My school is renowned for delivering academic excellence. All the teachers are very kind and supportive and the great thing is, all of them live in the locality, so you can visit them easily anytime you need help. What my school lacks in though is providing its students with the platforms to showcase their talents on national and international levels. Unfortunately that is why we haven't had any opportunity to participate in international Olympiads or any such competitions.
The world I come from has taught me to be hard working, perseverant and to always strive for excellence. It has made me realize that I alone am the master of my fate.
Describe the world you come from; for example, your family, clubs, school, community, city, or town. how has that world shaped your dreams and aspirations?(*) (200-250 words)
I have practically lived my whole life in the Fauji Fertilizer Company Township which is a small industrial community on the outskirts of a small city. Although growing up in a remote gated community has sheltered me from the rigors of city life, it has imbued me with a drive to get out into the world to broaden my horizons and meet new people.
My family means the world to me and I live every day to make my parents proud. My father has been an inspiring personality in my life. In 2001 he underwent kidney transplant surgery. From my father I have learnt that whenever life throws you a curve ball, face it with a smile on your face. My mother has taught me the importance of finding balance between school, friends and family.
My school is renowned for delivering academic excellence. All the teachers are very kind and supportive and the great thing is, all of them live in the locality, so you can visit them easily anytime you need help. What my school lacks in though is providing its students with the platforms to showcase their talents on national and international levels. Unfortunately that is why we haven't had any opportunity to participate in international Olympiads or any such competitions.
The world I come from has taught me to be hard working, perseverant and to always strive for excellence. It has made me realize that I alone am the master of my fate.