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I prefer to have a large family because i love babies very much. I like taking care of children and grow them up. In addition, children are essential to maintain the family happiness. Whenever parents get into trouble, quarrel with each other, children would be a rope that ties the family together. I believe that a family won't be happy without a child, without a sound of cries and smiles of children. Furthernore, when you have many children, they will look after you when you get older.
I prefer to have a large family because i love babies very much. I like taking care of children and grow them up. In addition, children are essential to maintain the family happiness. Whenever parents get into trouble, quarrel with each other, children would be a rope that ties the family together. I believe that a family won't be happy without a child, without a sound of cries and smiles of children. Furthernore, when you have many children, they will look after you when you get older.