We know you lead a busy life, full of activities, many of which is required by you. Tell us something that you do for the pleasure of it. (100 words)
Listening to calm, soothing music is something that I enjoy very much. The music will comfort me when I am depress and calm me down when I am angry. The most important thing is that it gives me inspiration. When I experience writer's block, listening to music enables me to put a pen to paper. While listening to music at night, I will recall my day. Recalling things that I have done or encountered throughout the day made me realized the mistakes I have made or my proud moment. I would improve myself to become a better man.
Please check for grammar mistakes. I feel that the last two sentences is a bit weird. Is there any way to rephrase them? Do I need to be give more specific examples?
Listening to calm, soothing music is something that I enjoy very much. The music will comfort me when I am depress and calm me down when I am angry. The most important thing is that it gives me inspiration. When I experience writer's block, listening to music enables me to put a pen to paper. While listening to music at night, I will recall my day. Recalling things that I have done or encountered throughout the day made me realized the mistakes I have made or my proud moment. I would improve myself to become a better man.
Please check for grammar mistakes. I feel that the last two sentences is a bit weird. Is there any way to rephrase them? Do I need to be give more specific examples?