New York City is an essential element of academic and cultural life at NYU

New York City is an essential element of academic and cultural life at NYU. If you could engage in an activity or start a club or service organization at NYU, what would it be and how would you envision it impacting the larger community?

New York City is well developed with a convenient traffic system which includes thousands of hundreds of taxis, private cars, buses and other vehicles. Though those vehicles have given us so many benefits that save our time and energy, we should pay huge attention to their damages on our environment. I want to devote myself to some environment protection programs and maybe I will begin a volunteer project to tell the public about the exact amount of CO2 the vehicles can produce every hour and some indirect results of too much CO2 and harmful gas in the air.

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New York is well developed citywith a convenient traffic system which includes hundreds of taxis, private cars, buses and other vehicles (you should try to write other cars, like vans, trucks, etc.). Though those vehicles had given us so many benefits that saved our time and energy, we should pay more attention to their damages to our environment. I want work on environment protection programs and devote myself to volunteer projects which publise and educate citizens about the exact amount of CO2 the vehicles can produce every hour and some indirect results of too much CO2 and harmful gas in the air (maybe you should elaborate on some other facts other than CO2 from cars, like the greenhouse effect and global warming, etc.).

Add one more sentence telling about the club you would start. Then, add a sentence about a specific facility at the school that could be helpful. Also, those suggestions made by Angela are good! Thanks Angela, and good luck to you, hallelujah

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