I'd be grateful if you'd briefly review this essay draft along with any constructive criticisim if necessary. (100 words or less)
Nothing else interests me more than computer science, and Purdue can assist me in exploring the field in far greater detail. I'm impressed by all the CS courses the university has to offer under the guidance of well-distinguished professors. One of them that I'm particularly excited about is Competitive Programming III by Ninghui Li. I'm also looking forward to working on research projects under the guidance of professors like Christopher Clinton and Tamal Dey. Additionally, taking part in the CPU club for ACM-ICPC will up my programming skills, and AITP can support me in making better career decisions.
How will opportunities at Purdue support your interests, both in and out of the classroom?
Nothing else interests me more than computer science, and Purdue can assist me in exploring the field in far greater detail. I'm impressed by all the CS courses the university has to offer under the guidance of well-distinguished professors. One of them that I'm particularly excited about is Competitive Programming III by Ninghui Li. I'm also looking forward to working on research projects under the guidance of professors like Christopher Clinton and Tamal Dey. Additionally, taking part in the CPU club for ACM-ICPC will up my programming skills, and AITP can support me in making better career decisions.