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Quiet/Picturesque/Homely feeling/Meaningful ideas/Witty Banter; Why Columbia Essay?


emalw202 3 / 9 1  
Dec 30, 2012   #1
Please tell us what you find most appealing about Columbia and why. (1500 character limit)

What about Columbia appeals to you most and why?

As I crossed Columbia's gates, I felt as though I had entered a portal to an old-world town of a bygone era; the cacophony and abrasiveness of the city streets were instantly replaced by a pleasant quiet and picturesque air. But most exciting, as I talked with a few students, I saw curious and enthusiastic people, much like me, who loved learning. The distinct urban culture was unmistakable; youth were gathered on library steps, while multitudes roamed about the open plaza. The entire campus suddenly seemed like a grand market exchange, with perpetual transaction of meaningful ideas and witty banter. Immediately, I felt at home; I yearned to be part of this unparalleled experience. But while Columbia's atmosphere was certainly enticing, its academics also seemed thoroughly satisfying. Columbia's apparent pairing of the liberal arts with other fields of study epitomizes the well-rounded and intellectually stimulating education I desire. It also presents, what I believe, is a singular opportunity for peers to develop a close bond as they share perspectives and work on the same tasks together. Uncommon as impressive to me was the inclusion of oral debate and extensive inquiry in small, discussion-based classes. As someone who loves asking questions, speaking aloud, and reflecting on even the tiniest of things, such a program is perfect for me! Essentially, while many colleges offer sterling reputations and a myriad of resources, Columbia is simply more tailored to my pursuits!
HarvardAccept - / 57 24  
Dec 30, 2012   #2
No exclamation marks. No Essentially. Cacophony makes New York sound like hell (Even though it is, Columbia loves New York City).
Good essay! This will sway you towards the admissions pool for sure.
OP emalw202 3 / 9 1  
Dec 30, 2012   #3
Thanks so much! I will try to be more judicious about what I include.
Udensi 3 / 7  
Dec 31, 2012   #4
the part u said But while Columbia's atmosphere was certainly enticing, its academics also seemed thoroughly satisfying...you should restructure to it to sth like..'ALongside Columbia's enticing atmosphere it has a satisfying academical atmosphere to go with it.''.the word seemed there will make them think u not sure of academics in columbia university..the essay is really good..and thanks do check mine please..its pretty urgent i got today to turn it in,


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