I would love some general criticism. Also a little bit of cutting would be nice as well- so any suggestions on what I can get rid of or rephrase let me know. Thanks!
What affects the person we become is not the experiences we have, but rather how we perceive them. As an optimist I view the world in a way most people can never imagine. I live my life for the moment and when faced with hardship, I can't help but find the proverbial silver lining.
While walking to the coffee shop my freshman year I crossed the street unsuspecting of the man in the truck whose windshield was fogged up. He did not see me and I was run over by his truck as he turned the corner; the resulting consequence was a contusion in my left ankle. Still in shock, I dealt with the situation and managed to limp about 20 feet further, continuing on in my journey for coffee. My optimism has let me not be hindered by things that block my path, and this situation was no different. While waiting for my coffee, a teacher saw me and I proceeded to explain what happened to both her and the man working. Stunned, my teacher offered me a ride to school but not before the barista gave me my coffee, free of charge. As many would look upon this experience as traumatizing, I see the brighter side. Not only did I receive a free coffee and learn a new word (contusion), but I now had an intriguing story to tell, something I find quite valuable. Although some may consider this perspective pure insanity, I find that life is better when the sun is always shining. For this reason I am proud to be an optimist and see a world of hope rather than one of despair.
In every situation I see the positives, something to gain from the experience. I drive myself two and a half hours south to Vacaville every other Friday night and back north to Redding the following Sunday to visit my Mom for the weekend. My optimistic perspective has allowed me to persevere through the harder times in life, and a long, boring drive is no different. Although I have been making this excursion for six years, it is only my second year making the trip solo. I aim to come out stronger from every experience and from this solitary drive I have learned the value of intrinsic solitude. In addition, when I made the trip with my parents, I got a chance to bond with them that otherwise may not have been possible; we were able to talk free of distractions. This unique experience has allowed me to subdue my hyperactive personality and be proud of the transition I have made into a calmer human being.
I always look for the brighter side of every situation. Although there are many challenges that will come my way in the future, I am sure that my unique perspective will help me to deal with them. Being an optimist has allowed me to understand that everything happens for a reason. My eyes are now open to the world and I can see that the sun is always shinning with the color of life.
What affects the person we become is not the experiences we have, but rather how we perceive them. As an optimist I view the world in a way most people can never imagine. I live my life for the moment and when faced with hardship, I can't help but find the proverbial silver lining.
While walking to the coffee shop my freshman year I crossed the street unsuspecting of the man in the truck whose windshield was fogged up. He did not see me and I was run over by his truck as he turned the corner; the resulting consequence was a contusion in my left ankle. Still in shock, I dealt with the situation and managed to limp about 20 feet further, continuing on in my journey for coffee. My optimism has let me not be hindered by things that block my path, and this situation was no different. While waiting for my coffee, a teacher saw me and I proceeded to explain what happened to both her and the man working. Stunned, my teacher offered me a ride to school but not before the barista gave me my coffee, free of charge. As many would look upon this experience as traumatizing, I see the brighter side. Not only did I receive a free coffee and learn a new word (contusion), but I now had an intriguing story to tell, something I find quite valuable. Although some may consider this perspective pure insanity, I find that life is better when the sun is always shining. For this reason I am proud to be an optimist and see a world of hope rather than one of despair.
In every situation I see the positives, something to gain from the experience. I drive myself two and a half hours south to Vacaville every other Friday night and back north to Redding the following Sunday to visit my Mom for the weekend. My optimistic perspective has allowed me to persevere through the harder times in life, and a long, boring drive is no different. Although I have been making this excursion for six years, it is only my second year making the trip solo. I aim to come out stronger from every experience and from this solitary drive I have learned the value of intrinsic solitude. In addition, when I made the trip with my parents, I got a chance to bond with them that otherwise may not have been possible; we were able to talk free of distractions. This unique experience has allowed me to subdue my hyperactive personality and be proud of the transition I have made into a calmer human being.
I always look for the brighter side of every situation. Although there are many challenges that will come my way in the future, I am sure that my unique perspective will help me to deal with them. Being an optimist has allowed me to understand that everything happens for a reason. My eyes are now open to the world and I can see that the sun is always shinning with the color of life.