what are my goals?
everyone in this world have different goal .we all dream about being something in future,we all have an objectif.for example ,people who dreams about becoming a businnessman has a goal .other people may want to be in different branches .thats their goals.i do have a goal as well.everysince i was little,becoming a nurse ,was somthinng who always fascinate me .knowing that,i started educate myself by now.further more i will have a better career,indeed save people life.
please i want to know if thats a good start for an introduction.im not good at all at writing essays .please give me some advise
what are my goals?
everyone in this world have different goal .we We all dream about being something becoming successfull in future,we all have an objectif. objective of life for example: Becoming a successfull businessman, Docter,Engineer, Teacher, a Nurse and manymore. Likewise i also has a goel for my life. I want to become a nurse and help the people in there illness. Morover, in order to aquire a nursing degree I have started taking classes and I am looking forward to foster my knowledge and intellegence to have a successfull life and career ahead. Mother terresa has quoted that " we all can't do great things at a time, but we can do small things with great love" This is what my motivation is for and i also want to help other by getting into this proffession of nursing.
This is how i will start !
people who dreams about becoming a businnessman has a goal .other people may want to be in different branches .thats their goals.i do have a goal as well.everysince i was little,becoming a nurse ,was somthinng who always fascinate me .knowing that,i started educate myself by now.further more i will have a better career,indeed save people life.
please i want to know if thats a good start for an introduction.im not good at all at writing essays .please give me some advise
thank you for ur help.i have a lot of idea from what u write.thanks again
Capitalize the first word of every sentence!
Do not write things that are obvious:
everyone in this world have different goal .
Shalini it is so nice of you to do this work to help Natacha.
Natacha, here is a sentence I'll write for you:
Knowing that, I decided to start to educate myself, and if I continue to work hard I will have a better career and indeed save people's lives.
:-)
thank you Kevin .now please what do you thinink i should do to write good essays?please give me some advise.im smart in math chemistry and physique.but when it comes to english i have some lacks of ideas.thinks for helping me again.
Okay, add lots of sentences, and do not worry about whether or not you are making mistakes. Just write and write and write. Then, go back and read it.
Make a list of every point you make. Do you know what I mean? List them:
1. Everyone in this world have different goal, and mine is to save people's lives.
2. Ever since I was little, becoming a nurse was somthing an idea that always fascinate me.
3. Knowing that I wanted to be a nurse, I started educate myself.
4. I a ready to study hard and contribute to the success of my peers.
For every point, write a paragraph. each paragraph has a topic sentence, a sentence to explain what you mean, an example, and a conclusion sentence to repeat the main idea from the topic sentence. For example:
Everyone in the world has a goal, and mine is to save people's lives. I think human life is so mysterious and uncertain, but I know that my own life will be meaningful if I can apply my skill to save others. For example, I might study just a little bit harder than someone else, and a life will be saved because it was me working that day instead of someone less qualified. I want to make a positive change in this world by working hard and giving great effort.
OKKKKKKKKK KEVIN FANTASTIC!I REALLY UNDERSTAND HOW I SHOULD WRITE AN ESSAY.I HAVE TO REALATE ALL MY SENTENCES TOGETHER AND WRITE A LOT AND After that read my essays see if it makes sense for me.thank you so much.
Awesome, yes! I'm glad it helped. Now you can use your advanced understanding to help other people here, if you have time, by checking the "unanswered" list .
and check out essayforum.com/ef-contributor-page/
Tell people the secret:
one paragraph = one idea
That way, very essay you write will be one BIG idea supported by several smaller ideas the body paragraphs. Every essay will be profound...
:-)
