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"Seek knowledge in the Land of China" - Personal statement for CUHKSZ



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1 day ago   #1
CUHKSZ Personal Statement *Required*
- NO MORE THAN 600 WORDS.

"Seek knowledge in the Land of China" was a phrase my parents always told me. Growing up in a Chinese-Indonesian family, where academic expectations are pretty high, has taught me discipline and resilience, which helped shape who I am today.

Being consistently engaged in math since a young age has sparked my love for the subject. Math allowed me to explore my critical and analytical thinking, which I have enjoyed since an early age. As a child who loves to try new things, math provides an opportunity for endless possibilities, deepening my passion for the subject. My early curiosity naturally turned into dedication as I grew up. This dedication resulted in winning a math championship.

My interest in math eventually led me to programming, where I discovered how mathematical logic can be transformed into real solutions through code. The beauty in breaking complex problems into smaller steps strengthened my desire to study in an environment that values innovation and analytical thinking. Now seeking knowledge in the Land of China was more than a saying; it was a challenge I had to embrace.

Because of financial circumstances, I attended a modest high school, but it pushed me to seek bigger challenges and make the most of what I had. While adjusting to a new environment as an introverted student was not easy, especially with the transition to a more demanding curriculum, I forced myself to embrace it by developing better self-study habits. By my second year, my academic performance improved significantly, giving me the confidence to run for Class Representative Council president. Although I lost, I was entrusted with the role of vice-president, and I learned to accept my loss and grow as a leader. Being in an organization really helped me with my time management, but more importantly, it let me work with others and handle challenges under pressure. Realizing my school's limited resources, I'm fueled to seek broader opportunities to grow, which I'm eager to pursue by studying abroad.

At first, I was not interested in studying in China. But as I learned more about China's role in global innovation, I realized that studying there would place me at the center of rapid academic and technological growth. With my passion for mathematics and programming, I plan to major in AI or data science, and that's when CUHKSZ caught my attention. Known for its high rank in STEM majors, CUHKSZ offers various courses and opportunities to collaborate with China's tech industries. These strengthened my motivation to pursue my studies at CUHKSZ, where I could not only study but also build a strong foundation for a future career in technology and eventually contribute to Indonesia's growing digital sector.

While I pursue my degree at CUHKSZ, I plan to take advantage of the university's strong industry partnerships and actively participate in events and projects that eventually could land me an internship at China's top tech companies. Then, after earning my bachelor's degree, I plan to use my skills and knowledge to work in China's tech industry for several years before returning to Indonesia to contribute to its growing digital sector by developing technological solutions that address local challenges.

In the end, the challenge to "seek knowledge in the Land of China" has become a path I have chosen to walk. Studying at CUHKSZ is the embodiment of that commitment. Here, I hope to transform my passion for mathematics and technology into something meaningful, both for myself and for the communities I hope to serve.
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10 hrs ago   #2
The advice that your parents gave you is the anchor point of this whole essay. Therefore, saying you were not interested in studying in China at first negates your opening anchor sentence. You should avoid saying that so you can keep the consistent image of someone whose parental influence drove you to focus on studies and grades that would allow you to eventually study in China. We need to see your enthusiasm with regards to how you prepared to study in China. That is going to be the main selling point of your essay. Make it appear that you are fulfilling a bucket list and a family ambition by working on gaining admission to CUHKSZ


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