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Smith College - A theme song that describes you best; "What's This!"



biubiubiubiu 1 / 2  
Jan 15, 2013   #1
please be harsh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!thanks!!!!!!!!And since I am not a native speaker, great warriors, please kill my grammar mistakes as well~!!!!! : ]

Prompt:Applying to college can be serious business; yet we're eager to get to know you in a less formal way. Have fun answering the following question: If you had a theme song - a piece of music that describes you best - what would it be and why? Please include the name of the song and the artist. (Limit response to 150 words)

Every morning when jumping out of my quilt castle, I feel like coming out from mom's womb again. Both the universe and I are young, and everything is new. I can't help starting my day with a surprised scream:

"What's this? Is it a mushroom?"
"No. It's dad holding an umbrella."
"What's this? Is it alchemy?"
"No. It's magnesium burning in oxygen."
"What's this? Is it a violation of marriage law?"
"No. It's a special marriage custom of Mosuo people, and you should learn to appreciate their culture!" answered my 17-year-old self.
I enjoy being confused, amazed, or dumbfound, which means chances to learn and experience something new. I keep asking "what's this", then "why" and "what if", yearning to explore the unknown like there's no tomorrow, for the more I know, the more I don't know. That's why Danny Elfman's "What's this" vividly portraits my life! And every time I look at this interesting world with curious infant' eyes and ask, I always find world a fine place and worth fighting for.

zdv 12 / 68  
Jan 15, 2013   #2
i really love your essay. everything about it is great. the only mistake i found is that you use the word portraits instead of portrays.

help me with mine?
maerd2012 5 / 17  
Jan 15, 2013   #3
I almost wrote the same song as yours...-.- I like your essay!:)


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