i m an international student applying for Johns hopkins (only few hours left please help me )
can you please find grammatical errors and give opinions about the whole essay or mention the part you find best in this article
As a student inspired by Mahatma Gandhi I always believed that practice is worth more than tons of preaching. And always actively participated in a thing that requires practical knowledge, overall concentration and enrich my spontaneous thinking.
As long as I remember I have found Engineering extremely appealing for variety of reasons, especially for my interest in making machines more intelligent and more advanced. And I always believed that Electrical Engineering is a field that provide a collaborative environment for researches that can solve world problems and may change millions of lives.
I always wanted to graduate as an Electrical Engineer from a world famous college that will place a firm foundation for my future career as an innovator and technical revolutionist, so that I can place a vital role in the development of the whole nation and make my country India feel proud by making it as the most advanced place on earth and open endless opportunities for new generation kids.
JHU's engineering program hulks very deep in my head; because of their all-rounded programs and luxurious science labs and I believe Johns Hopkins University will help me achieve those dreams with their challenging work and world acclaimed teachers.
One of the best things I found is that research programs are one of your top priorities. I always wanted to be a significant part of any researches. Because I relish working in groups and help humanity to explore and discover all the hidden secrets. I am very positive that Johns Hopkins University is the ideal college for me.
I appreciate you taking the time to accommodate me, have a good day
can you please find grammatical errors and give opinions about the whole essay or mention the part you find best in this article
As a student inspired by Mahatma Gandhi I always believed that practice is worth more than tons of preaching. And always actively participated in a thing that requires practical knowledge, overall concentration and enrich my spontaneous thinking.
As long as I remember I have found Engineering extremely appealing for variety of reasons, especially for my interest in making machines more intelligent and more advanced. And I always believed that Electrical Engineering is a field that provide a collaborative environment for researches that can solve world problems and may change millions of lives.
I always wanted to graduate as an Electrical Engineer from a world famous college that will place a firm foundation for my future career as an innovator and technical revolutionist, so that I can place a vital role in the development of the whole nation and make my country India feel proud by making it as the most advanced place on earth and open endless opportunities for new generation kids.
JHU's engineering program hulks very deep in my head; because of their all-rounded programs and luxurious science labs and I believe Johns Hopkins University will help me achieve those dreams with their challenging work and world acclaimed teachers.
One of the best things I found is that research programs are one of your top priorities. I always wanted to be a significant part of any researches. Because I relish working in groups and help humanity to explore and discover all the hidden secrets. I am very positive that Johns Hopkins University is the ideal college for me.
I appreciate you taking the time to accommodate me, have a good day
