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Study Abroad Essay- Study Statement; As a person of French descent...



collegebound28 13 / 22  
Mar 29, 2014   #1
Looking for some feedback on a study abroad essay: " Type a one to two paged, double spaced statement on your proposed program of study abroad and how it will be related to your present academic program. Also describe the personal benefits you expect to receive from the program."

As international relations major study abroad provides a host of benefits both academically and on a personal level. I feel that study abroad in France could not only enrich my academic program but could provide personal benefits as well. By studying abroad in France I hope to experience another culture and to improve my language skills.

I would like to study abroad in Besacon , France for the Fall 2015 Semester. As an international relations major, experience abroad is an important part of my academic program for two reasons. The first is language; a second language is necessary to work and study within the international relations field. Study abroad is the best way to improve language skills through interacting with native speakers and being immersed in that language. Although language classes are extremely helpful there is no replacement for immersion; I feel I am ready to take the next step in order to improve my fluency. Experience living abroad is also valuable in that it provides valuable interaction with other cultures; as a student of international relations the ability to successfully interact within other cultures is vital to future success in the international relations field.

By experiencing another culture and being placed outside one's zone, study abroad can allow one to grow as an individual. By studying abroad in France I hope to be able to not only learn about another culture, but to gain perspective on my culture. As a person of French descent, I'm interested in connecting with my heritage and learning more about where my family comes from. Knowing your heritage is an important part of identity and by studying abroad, I will be able to explore that part of my identity.

Jaanu 3 / 5  
Mar 30, 2014   #2
According to my knowledge, I have given some suggestion. Please experts, let me know if it is wrong.
both academically and on a personal level ---> USEboth academically and personally
study abroad ---> studying in abroad
Although language classes are extremely helpful there is no replacement for immersion -->USE COMMAAlthough language classes are extremely helpful, there is no replacement for immersion.

Experience living abroad is also valuable in that it provides valuable interaction with other cultures --> Experience in living abroad is also valuable in thatand it provides valuable interaction with other cultures.

as a student of international relations the ability to successfully interact within other cultures is vital to future success in the international relations field.-->As a student of international relations, the ability to successful an interaction within other cultures is vital to future success in the international relations field.
dumi 1 / 6793  
Mar 30, 2014   #3
As international relations major study abroad provides a host of benefits both academically and on a personal level.

My major being International Relations, studying abroad would provide many benefits both academically and personally.

I feel that study abroad in France could not only enrich my academic program but could provide personal benefits as well.

Especially, studying in France would definitely broaden my perspectives while enriching my academic program.

By studying abroad in France I hope to experience another culture and to improve my language skills.

I will be given great opportunities to learn French language while being able to gain a rich exposure to French culture.
Pahan 1 / 1824  
May 18, 2014   #4
By experiencing another culture and being placed outside one's comfort zone, studying abroad can allow one to grow as an individual.

As international relations major, studying abroad provideswould provide me with a host of benefits both academically and on a personal level.

Well, I think you need to include points that talk about you more specifically.


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