Hi, I am an international student applying this year, and I do think I need some help on my Swarthmore essay. It's currently 25 words over the limit, so I am really hoping someone can tell me which part is verbose. Thanks in advance!
"Swarthmore College has given students the knowledge, insight, skills, and experience to become leaders for the common good."
This very first sentence I read about Swarthmore touches me to the heart.
I am desperate for anything that prepares me for my dream of being a political scientist, being someone who is going to contribute to social freedom, justice, and peace.
So I fell in love with Swarthmore, at the first sight.
Gradually, the more closer I look into the school, the more I feel like Swarthmore and I are a perfect match.
As an international student who decides to maximize my undergraduate study in US, I am fascinated by the special, limitless liberal arts education. The emphasis on academics at Swarthmore magnifies such an education, for here the exploration of all subjects contains great depth instead of shallow attempt. And its small class size gives me brilliant opportunity to study directly under the political scientists such as James Kurth, Dominic Tierney and Ben Berger.
Most importantly, all kinds of thoughts are going to prosper here, and all kinds of thoughts will be cultivated. The political liberal atmosphere is what I have been dreaming of. No one will stare at my claims of equally respected gender roles in society, or the "grandiloquent" faith in democracy and social justice. In contrast, I will find a lot of like-minders, as well as a lot of different but provoking thoughts. At Swarthmore, I am sure to adopt more progressive yet prudent ideas as I become a more mature thinker.
To me, Swarthmore is never a just famous name. It's the place where I can see my dreams glow.
"Swarthmore College has given students the knowledge, insight, skills, and experience to become leaders for the common good."
This very first sentence I read about Swarthmore touches me to the heart.
I am desperate for anything that prepares me for my dream of being a political scientist, being someone who is going to contribute to social freedom, justice, and peace.
So I fell in love with Swarthmore, at the first sight.
Gradually, the more closer I look into the school, the more I feel like Swarthmore and I are a perfect match.
As an international student who decides to maximize my undergraduate study in US, I am fascinated by the special, limitless liberal arts education. The emphasis on academics at Swarthmore magnifies such an education, for here the exploration of all subjects contains great depth instead of shallow attempt. And its small class size gives me brilliant opportunity to study directly under the political scientists such as James Kurth, Dominic Tierney and Ben Berger.
Most importantly, all kinds of thoughts are going to prosper here, and all kinds of thoughts will be cultivated. The political liberal atmosphere is what I have been dreaming of. No one will stare at my claims of equally respected gender roles in society, or the "grandiloquent" faith in democracy and social justice. In contrast, I will find a lot of like-minders, as well as a lot of different but provoking thoughts. At Swarthmore, I am sure to adopt more progressive yet prudent ideas as I become a more mature thinker.
To me, Swarthmore is never a just famous name. It's the place where I can see my dreams glow.