'top-notch education for an affordable tuition' - Why this University

In one or two sentences, please tell us why the University of X interests you (300 characters max).

University of X offers a top-notch education for an affordable tuition, even for out-of-state students. It has a renowned engineering department and a low student-faculty ratio which is dedicated to improving intellectual development of the students through more personalized education.

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University of X offers a top-notch education for an affordable tuition, even for out-of-state students. It has a renowned engineering department and a low student-faculty ratio, which is dedicated to improving intellectual development of the students through more personalized education.

You could change which to that; I think it makes it flow a little more. Just a suggestion. If you change which to that, you no longer need the comma.

Otherwise it is good, short, and sweet.

wow this is a tough topic. great job!

Thanks. I hope I get in