Unanswered [7] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Writing Feedback   % width   Posts: 2


Ielts : academic writing ; Learning A New Language Fast and Properly



xlife 1 / -  
Apr 3, 2014   #1
Good night everyone

I'm glad to see my essay and give your sincere feedback

Thank you very much and I will appreciate your advice

Question:
Some people believe that the best way to learn anything is " learning by doing ". Others would rather learn through books and from teachers. Think of learning a language. Which way do you think is a better way to learn a language ?

Answer :
I remembered my grandfather's words since I first started to learn English as a second language . He said to me " Your teachers and books will show you the most effortless way to speak fluently " . I strongly believe in my grandfather's advice .And learner should attend classes and study well from books , instead of getting language from public .

Generally , teachers have a clear experience in what is the best for any student to learn fast , as they have taught many different students every year . Also , excellent books would do that too . You are free to decide which book or course you take depending on your level .Whereas , In the streets , you will not have a choice like this .

In addition , It is very rare to see someone in public places stopping you while you are talking to him or her to say to you " hey , you are using the wrong grammar here or the incorrect word " . While , teachers will stop you because they have to teach you . And every good books have the key solution , so you can correct your mistakes by yourself .

At the same time while you are having your studies , you probably would to practice out of classes .And this is good in a way . You will have an exciting time but you still don't know if you are using the language properly . If you tip a video of you or record yourself , you will have the opportunity to cheek later and correct your mistakes .

In my opinion , I would like to say that it is better and faster to learn a new language from teachers and books , rather than involving in outside learning .

( 307 words )

puman 6 / 13  
Apr 3, 2014   #2
You cannot use "I, you, we" in IELTS, and must change to objective words.
eg. Some say..., most people believe..., For example, when individuals/ citizens...


Home / Writing Feedback / Ielts : academic writing ; Learning A New Language Fast and Properly
Need Writing or Editing Help?
Fill out one of these forms:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳

Academic AI Writer:
Custom AI Writer ◳