Advantages/Disadvantages. Nowadays there are many online courses offered by universities. Writting.

Nowadays there are many online courses offered by universities. Do you think that the advantages of online learning outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, education is very developed by advancements in technology. There are many online courses offered by universities, we can't deny their benefits. We don't need to worry about going to school, the education center, or weather problems. Especially when COVID-19 broke out, all people mustn't go out if they don't have special reason, studying online is a proper way. We can also have flexibility in timings. There are a lot of convenient programs to study online such as Zoom, Teams...etc. They have so many helpful features that can help us study easily.

On the other hand, about half of students don't really concentrate on their learning, because their teachers can only see their faces and they can do anything they want to do. The Internet is also necessary. Learning can be interruptive if teachers' or students' networks are weak and it results in ineffective learning. In short, online courses are one of the best education methods.

This is not an essay that meets the minimum scoring requirements for a task 2 essay. It is only 150+ words, when you are expected to write at least 250 words. Based on the severe lack of word count, the deductions that will be applied to the word count will bring the score of this essay into the negative level. It does not have a chance of passing in an actual setting.

There is no real paraphrasing involved or writer's opinion presentation in the given essay. You have not actually focused on talking about the subject provided in a manner that follows the expected response presentation. Perhaps you are not familiar with the rudiments of writing a task 2 essay so let me list it here for you. For a task 2 essay you must write:

A paraphrased topic + writer's opinion + short reasoning presentation
2 paragraphs that discuss the 2 reasons previously presented
A concluding summary that recaps the previous topic and discussion

The total will be 4-5 paragraphs, depending upon the writing instructions.