Advantages of reading online - cheapness, convenience, and portability

e-books are popular these days

Over the past few years, the growth of the Internet, mobile banking and home delivery services have made online reading. And there has been a considerable increase in a number of people reading online. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement due to several reasons as following:

First of all, E-books are greatly cheaper than traditional ones. On the computers as well as smartphones, you merely pay 100 thousand dongs per month and you can read any books you want. For example, if you purchase Sexo Oculto, you have to pay nearly 420 thousand dongs. Yet when reading online, you only pay 6 thousand dongs.

On top of that, e-readers can be convenient and quick. Book buyers can choose books that are not physically sold in their local areas. It means that instead of having to travel, they can use the Internet to buy their expected ones at their home. Only by a click mouse, you will have a book immediately. For instance, when buying Shecklock Homes, it takes us 5 seconds to wait for it.

Lastly, the books we read online are portable. If you purchase electronic textbooks, it will be much easier to carry them home and back to class. You can even load all of your books to the phone that you already carry with you anyway. This allows you to keep your entire library in your pocket, so your textbooks will be available to you wherever you are.

At the end of the day, reading online is advantageous for readers due to cheapness, convenience, and portability. Therefore, it is advisable to have mobile devices to read e-books.

Hello @tranphuongnhi
After reading your essay, i found out that this sentence is confusing. "e-readers can be convenient and quick". I guess you want to write something like this, "buying e-books is more convenient and quick ". this also will have correlation with the next sentences in the paragraph.

in addition to this, there is no correlation in "... services have made online reading" with your reasons. for the second and third paragraph you only describe about the advantages of reading e-book. I think the main topic of this essay is about the growth of the internet, mobile banking and home delivery and how it's services affect our way in reading.

I hope my feedback can help you to reevaluate this essay. thank you.

@tranphuongnhi
Hello there. While quite late, I'll try my best to provide you with a bit of writing feedback on your writing. I hope this assists you somehow still.

The structure and manner of composition of some of your lines can be confusing. Try to carry a firmer tone when you're writing to ensure that you do not lose the meaning of your words. You can do this through focusing more on the specific meaning of words. For instance, try to be specific. What do you mean by how "mobile banking" has made "online reading"? If you can be more specific as to how this has progressed, it would be better for your writing.

Bear in mind these specifics and you'll go a long way. Best of luck as always!