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Writing task 1 the alteration of country's export of several products for one year from 2015

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Mar 29, 2021   #1

the value of one country's exports in various categories

The given table and chart depict the alteration of country's export earning in several products for one year from 2015 to 2016. Data was measured in billion.

Overall, most of the products experienced an increased number, except Gems And jewellery decreased during the period given. Petroleum products contributed the biggest amount, while textile and engineered goods made a significant rise.

To begin with, the petroleum products started at 61 billion in 2015 and rose as many as 3 % becoming 63% in 2016. Besides, engineered goods stood at nearly 56 billion and experienced a considerably rise number as many as 8.5% after one year.

Unlike the two previous products, the others categories showed low number. There was only a little different number of change in Agricultural products at approximately 31 billion in 2015 and just over 31 billion in 2016.

Interestingly, textiles was the lowest in 2015 which stood at nearly 26%, albeit textiles could jump significantly as many as 15.24%.
Gems and jewellery decreased over the period given. Starting at around 43 billion and had a significant dip (5,18%) in the end of the given period.

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Mar 30, 2021   #2
Your information in the first sentence is incorrect. First of all, there are two images represented, a table chart and a bar chart. So you have a image identification error in that presentation. Second, each presentation has a different focus, the bar chart represents the export earnings and the table chart, shows the percentage change in values for the same products. There is a TA error in your understanding and presentation of each image information that will cause inaccuracies in your data reporting.

Do not capitalize the word "and" at any given point. It cannot be capitalized in the middle of a presentation because it is not a proper noun. It cannot be used at the start of a sentence because it is a connecting word. It is one of the words in the English language that can never be capitalized in an academic or creative writing presentation.

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