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The alteration of the lakeside in 2000 and 2009 is shown in the diagram



ifraanisa05 44 / 67  
Dec 1, 2016   #1
The changes in Lakeside in 2000 and 2009.

The alteration of the lakeside in 2000 and 2009 is shown in the diagram. Overall, it can be seen that residential area was concentrated in the north-west part of the lakeside while other public services were developed at each side of the area

In the west side of the river, several changes in public services happened between those two years. Following by the developing years, Art Centre was rebuilt and changed the name into Cinema. Afterwards, the number of offices and university was constructed next to residential area while derelic warehouse was demolished and turned into a car park. Moreover, a shopping centre was built opposite the cinema and schools while the residential area in 2000 is moved into the north.

When the lake was changed into a pond at the end of the river, an enormous number of industrial estate was constructed at the east side of the river. In addition, in 2009, the ninefold of various types in industrial complex were built by destroying a residential area


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Wilyaftika23 46 / 31  
Dec 1, 2016   #2
... Art Centre is(was) rebuilt ...
... derelic warehouse is(Was) demolished ...
... shopping centre is(was) built opposite the cinema (...) in 2000 is(was) moved into the north.

When the lake is(Was) changed into a pond (...) number of industrial estate was(were) constructed ...


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