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Anthony Goldbloom, Machine learning expert, shared his experience in TED channel.



PHA2016 39 / 38  
Oct 6, 2016   #1
The jobs we will lose to machines-and the ones we want not

Anthony Goldbloom, Machine learning expert shared of his experience in TED channel. He argued that machine has changed people live which it not only able to task simple things but many applications. Machines are utilized in industry and academia such as data operating, cooking, game, data sharing, grading essay and disease testing. Simply, machine capable to operate many things in every situation. This hard to imagine that machine was able like human do. However, machine was brought some negative impact in people live. Online crime, credit card hacking as two of many effects caused by using machine. In this situation, people should be aware about growth of modern technology. As a result, with the globalization era, machine has responsible to change of human condition.

Source: TED

Yonathan 46 / 50  
Oct 6, 2016   #2
Hi PHA
Let me give you some correction

... learning expert shared of his experience in TED channel.
... it not only able to task(do) simple things (task) but many applications. Machines are utilized(utilised) in industry and academia(academic) such as data operating ...

Simply,(a) machine capable to ...
... people should be aware aboutof growth of modern technology.

Thank you...
korbansuspendcuy 8 / 13  
Oct 6, 2016   #3
hi..
nice essay..
I have some advice for you..

... people live which it [is] not only able to task[do] simple things but [also] many applications.

However, machine was brought[brings] some negative impact ...

I hope it helps..


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