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Is there a BEST AGE to marry? ; TOEFL IBT



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Apr 29, 2013   #1
What is the best age to marry? Give reasons and examples to support your response.

All of us look for joy and stability. Marriage seems for us the best way to fulfill our desires... However, if marriage pleased us in that effective way, at what age should we marry? My personal opinion based upon my surroundings is that even though the decision of marrying can bring happiness, it has not to be taken before the age of thirty.

First of all, the most important reason that prevents people to marry before the age of thirty is an economic reason; indeed, when a couple of persons decide to marry, they have to be ready economically, in equal meaning they should have their own home and car, and for sure a sum of money which is enough to ensure their daily needs; thus it is more advised to marry at the age of thirty after being economically ready...

Then, in addition to the economic reason, there is a psychological reason. Marriage is a serious step made by two mature persons who have had well explored both the life and the love, and are ready to devote their lives for each other and for their children. Therefore, marriage necessitates a high degree of maturity that only a person aged 30 can have... For instance, many marriages taken earlier than 30 years old end with getting divorced...

In conclusion, I think the best age to marry is 30 years old for two reasons: economic and psychological reason... Finally, even though marriage is a really important decision which has to be organized, it is not advised to take a lot of time planning for it...

I need to know what score over thirty ( /30 ) I deserve for this essay... and thanks in advance...

dumi 1 / 6793  
Apr 29, 2013   #2
All of us look for joy and stability. Marriage seems for us the best way to fulfill our desires

... Have a link set up between these two lines;
All of us look forward to enjoying life and having it stable. Marriage seems to be an ideal option for fulfilling these desires.
Let your ideas flow smoothly. One idea should give rise logically to another.

However, if marriage pleased us in that effective way, at what age should we marry?

If so, what is the best age for marrying?

My personal opinion based upon my surroundings is that even though the decision of marrying can bring happiness, it has not to be taken before the age of thirty.

In my personal opinion, which is based on my personal experiences and the surroundings that I grew up, is that one should not marry before he touches the age of thirty.


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