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How to catch up the grit? A strong effort and high understanding is a key to reaching personal goals


ibal28 20 / 30 5  
Sep 16, 2016   #1
TED Summary: Gift - The power of passion and perseverance

In this day and age, the kind of job that really required is a teacher. Angela Lee Duckworth, speaker of TEDtalk video as a teacher of a primary school said that a strong effort and high understanding is a key to reaching personal goals. To support those statements are not merely about intelligence, physical health and IQ, yet the imperative factor is grit. It becomes a pressure for someone to achieve what they ambition. So, how to catch up the grit?

It can be achieved by maintaining our mindset using a strong effort. Absolutely, we can't measure it off someone only by seeing their ability. Someone who fails when they try to catch their goals can increase their capability to be a success person. Parents and teacher is an important element to help their children or student to get it as well.

rosadesiana 38 / 40 2  
Sep 16, 2016   #2
Hi ibal28
here are my suggestiosn

In this day and age, thea kind of job that ...
... speaker of TEDtalk video said as a teacher of a primary school saidthat a strong effort and high ...

To support those statements are not merely ...
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It can be achieved by maint aining our mindset using with a strong effort.
Absolutely, we can't (do not) measure it off someone ...

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