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The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women


narsis_sh83 1 / -  
Jan 9, 2012   #1
The below chart compares the hours of leisure time in a different weeks between men and women in various situation of their employment in year of 1998 to 1999.

As we can see men who employed full time spent a little more time than women for leisure time. This amount is about 45 hours in a week but for women is about 40 hours. In part-time situation men had no time for leisure time but women spent 40 hours for leisure time. There is same result in unemployed and retired situation. In both of them men spent more than women time for leisure time approximately, 85 hours and women spent near to 80 hours. This is exactly two more than when they were full time employed. In the at least just female were housewives on that year, so they spent around 45 hours for leisure time.

It is clearly that in same situation for men and women in 1998-1990 men had more leisure time, also part-time job and housewives were just for women.




Jennyflower81 - / 690 96  
Jan 9, 2012   #2
The below chart compares the hours of leisure time in a different weekstypical week between men and women, alongsidein various situation of their employment status in the years of 1998 to 1999.

As weyou can see, men who were employed full time spent a little more time than women for leisure time. This amount is about 45 hours in a week, but forcompared to women iswho had about 40 hours of leisure time.In part-time situation men who worked part-timehad no time forreported no leisure time, but women who worked part-time spent 40 hours a week for leisure time. There isThe same result exists in unemployed and retired situationpeople . In both of themscenarios, men spent more hours than women time foron leisure time. Approximately , men who are not working or retired spent 85 hours and women spent near tonearly 80 hours. This is exactly two more than when they were full time employed full-time. In the at least just female were housewives on that year, so they spent around 45 hours for leisure time.

It is clearly that in same situation for men and women in 1998-1990 men had more leisure time, also part-time job and housewives were just for women.

Your last two sentences don't make sense, I would be more clear about the facts you are stating. Wrap things up in a clear, understandable way. Continue to edit your grammar. I hope this helps! Have a great night :)


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