The chart shows the rate of Asian women who got through their driving license test, compared to men

the percentage of women and men in one Asian country

There is a totally higher rate of Asian women who got through their driving license test in 1980-to-2010 period compared to men.
Overall, the percentage of feminine dominated that of masculine in that Asian nation and there was a special point at the last two period of year - 2000 and 2010 - that the proportion of male driver were at the same point.

In the first two columns which represented for the rate of two gender in 1980 and 1990, a similar trend occured in which the proportion of succeeding passing driving test in 1980 was smaller than that of 1990 but that of women was approximately double that percentage in men.

The rate of 2000 and 2010 in masculine driver reached the same point at almost 50% but they were still around 20% smaller than the peak of female driver at about 70% in 2020.

A task 1 essay has a 150 word minimum. When you write less than that number, the examiner will reduce your preliminary score due to non word count compliance. Always make sure you have at least 150 words present to avoid technical point deductions. You do not want to start the essay with a failing score.

The essay does not have the required summary overview information as required of this task. You have stated a fact and personal opinion at the beginning, rather than a simple information statement. You will lose points for not following the correct discussion format for that paragraph. Please review your lessons regarding task 1 essay writing and the paragraph components required to complete the task.

To simplify, IELTS Writing Task 1 has three parts: Introduction, Overview, and Body paragraph(s)

In introduction, the easiest way to do it is to paraphrase what is written in the question. You have to tell the examiner about the graph in your own words.

In overview, you can state the key features from the charts. In this part, you do not state the statistics. Only focus on the key features, like the most significant trend that you can find from the illustrations.

In body paragraph(s), you can add more details and features.

You can practice writing task 1 with that guideline as it will provide clarity for the readers. You also have to pay attention to the task completion. I am certain that your piece is less than 150 words. Not finishing the task will affect your grade, so you need to be careful.

Good luck!