Question :
The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
The pie charts illustrate the comparison of four different e-commerce retail sectors in Canada, during a 5 year period time from 2005 to 2010. Overall, it is noticeable while meal and drink and video games saw upward trend, others experienced a downward trend.
To begin with, in 2005 the highest proportion was electronics and tools, while diet and drink saw the lowest percentage. However, in 2010 food and beverage had decreased 5% in different year , it was 35% (2005) to 30% (2010). While, households was turned out dramatically from 25% in 2005 and became 15% during a 5 year.
In the other side, food and beverage had increased significantly from 22% (2005) to 32% in 2010. It was followed by video games, in 2005 it was 18% and rised to 23% in 2010. That video game sectors saw a less dramatically change, it just decreased one out of twenty.
The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
The pie charts illustrate the comparison of four different e-commerce retail sectors in Canada, during a 5 year period time from 2005 to 2010. Overall, it is noticeable while meal and drink and video games saw upward trend, others experienced a downward trend.
To begin with, in 2005 the highest proportion was electronics and tools, while diet and drink saw the lowest percentage. However, in 2010 food and beverage had decreased 5% in different year , it was 35% (2005) to 30% (2010). While, households was turned out dramatically from 25% in 2005 and became 15% during a 5 year.
In the other side, food and beverage had increased significantly from 22% (2005) to 32% in 2010. It was followed by video games, in 2005 it was 18% and rised to 23% in 2010. That video game sectors saw a less dramatically change, it just decreased one out of twenty.
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