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Ielts that competitive sports, both team and individual


amon2006 4 / 7  
Jan 1, 2012   #1
TOPIC_some people believe that competitive sports , both team and individual , have no place in the school curriculum.
Some people believe that there is no place for competitive sport in schools.But it is impossible to argue against the fact that both team and individual sports play a significant role for pupils in terms of their mental and physical developments. There are many reasons for people to appreciate the role of competitive sports.

Firstly, School years are very important for children . Skills which are obtained by pupils will definitely help them during their entire life. Creativity ,leadership, being a good team player and other abilities are crusial factors for supporting the opinion that such sports should keep their place in the school curriculum. For example during the football or basketball matches kids have chances to show themselves who are not actually good at other lessons. This is another main reason which gives everybody a lot real stories which need just to remember

Secondly, the main purpose of school subjects should be prepare children to real life. Most pupils rely on the subjects which will reveal the door of universities for them.By this way , they can find jobs and work in the future. i believe both individual and team sports might be very helpful in this contex.

Not apart from schools,potential sport stars might be taught or encouraged .

In conclusion , i think logical explanations will be very helpful for people who trying to avoid the team and individual sports role for the children

dontev22 1 / 1  
Jan 1, 2012   #2
... no place for competitive sports in schools.ButHowever, it is impossible to argue ...

Firstly, s chool years are very important ...

...and other abilities are cruc ial factors for supporting the opinion ...
For example, during the football or basketball matchesgamesstudents have chances to show themselves who are not ...This is another main reason which gives everybody a lot real stories which need just to remember.

Rewrite the above two sentences.

... might be very helpful in this context.
VioletPerformer - / 1  
Oct 22, 2014   #3
I'm stuck right now on 'Disadvantages Of Individual Sports' essay

So,I'm supposed to write an essay on the advantages and disadvantages of individual sports and I'm completely and utterly stuck right now.I basically need a few ideas but I can develop them on my own.Thanks in advance.
uci31 2 / 3 1  
Oct 22, 2014   #4
Advantages : you and your trainer can only focus on your own, you can fastly fix your lackness in sport. you can do sport as long as you want, as long as you feel until you are exhausted without thinking other people's ability so it will probably make you satisfied of your own ability.

Disadvantages : It will affect on your low motivation to win, or you merely practice it alone so you won't have wider relationship with other people.

Hope this help. anyway, please help me to check my essay as well :)


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