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Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.


phuongstella 1 / -  
Feb 26, 2024   #1
Nowadays, with the rapid development of technology, computers have become an integral part of education. In my opinion, the benefits of this trend, such as time-saving and convenience for teaching, outweigh its drawbacks, which include reduced interaction and potential distractions.

On one hand, it is understandable why many educators rely on computers as a teaching tool. They allow teachers to prepare diverse lessons beforehand, saving them time and effort. Additionally, computers offer a level of accuracy that humans cannot match. For example, in my school, both teachers and students use computers to type documents and create presentations.

On the other hand, excessive reliance on computers in education can have negative consequences. Instead of using their critical thinking skills, people tend to rely on computers to solve problems. This can lead to a loss of independence and a reliance on automation. Furthermore, the use of computers can create a distance between teachers and students. With less face-to-face interaction, students may become less engaged in class and more easily distracted.

In conclusion, while computers play a crucial role in education by saving time and providing convenience, they can also have negative effects such as reduced interaction and potential distractions.
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Feb 27, 2024   #2
197 words does not meet the minimum word requirement for the Task 2 essay. This sort of presentation would receive an automatic failing score. Why would that happen? The minimum word requirement is 250 words. Meet that number and the essay will not receive percentage deductions for not meeting the minimum word count. when the percentage deduction is applied this early on in the preliminary scoring portion, the achieved score is a failing one. When the additional deductions are applied for the other scoring sections, it becomes impossible for you to achieve a passing score overall. Even if you do well in those sections, the fact that your essay failed 50% of the test already due to the under word count will prevent you from getting a final passing score.
sophiemoore62 4 / 10 1  
Mar 1, 2024   #3
@phuongstella
You should further explain your first point before jumping to the next one. Be specific about it. Each body paragraph should have 5-6 sentences.


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