I agree... make sure your post attracts others' attention.... This is very crowded and difficult for us to follow :(
Well.... when I had to refer to the meaning of "umpteen" :D .... it's not a common usage... I wish if you kept your sentences to sound more simple, yet interesting
FIRST AND FOREMOST REASON OF INCREASING IN CRIME IS
AN UNEMPLOYMENT WHICH ENFORCED ARE YOUNGSTERS TO FALL IN THIS MUD OF DARKNESS BECAUSE DUE TO COMPUTERIZATION MAN WORK IS SHRINKING LIKE ANYTHING WHERE COMPUTER IS CAPABLE ENOUGH TO DO 10 TIMES WORK THAN MAN DO .
This is pretty too long.... OMG .... You better re post this one properly typed.... It's really distracting :(
You need to pay attention to grammar too.... Also, it's good to display your vocabulary knowledge, but never use word if you are not confident with them. If you use inappropriate words, they would ruin your sentence.