Describe differences in an island which has undergone a lot of changes

differences in an island

In the past, an island is really borrow. But now, it is more interesting. An is land has a lot of changed like: it has many home, restaurant, reception. Moreover, an island has more activity than it in the past. And tourist of this place has is more develop. In the past, when tourist didn't develop, footpath in this place have not much. But now, we can walk in there very easy. And now, we can swim it when we go on a beach. And now, people also plan many trees, so atmosphere in there really clear and fresh. Continue, sea travel in an island is develop too and life of people of an island easier and comfortable than it was. Because a lot of change of this island, it is more develop and this place is a one of place we can try travel.

When used as a simple writing exercise, this piece of writing could be judged as a good effort. It shows your potential to write in English. However, your vocabulary is not very good though. You are confused when it comes to using several English words, which creates confusion in your presentation. You require further English as a second language education before you can progress from this current basic level of English writing.

If you are writing this as a task 1 essay, then you have already failed the test. The formatting is incorrect, it fails to clearly explain the image to the reader, you are using a first person reference point when you should be doing it from a detached, no pronoun reference presentation.