The diagram illustrates a wind turbine specification in general and the best location to install it

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The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

The diagram illustrates a wind turbine specification in general and the best location to install it. Generally, according to the picture all of the wind turbine types need wind to produce power in order to generate an electricity.

To begin with, the generator can generate maximum electricity if the position is built on a hillside. This is because the position has a possibility to get maximum wind strengths. Then, followed by the second position of turbine in the sea that it can produce medium electricity. But, for domestic use, the output is about to 100 kilowatts because it is a small size.

The wind turbine usually have 3 main parts there are steel tower, generator, and blades that are built from fibreglass or wood. The generator can generate up to 1.5 megawatts. However, the wind turbine needs a sensor and a computer to get better condition of wind speed and wind direction.

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Incorrect reference in relation to S v. P. 2 illustrations are presented. Your reference is for one image only while describing 2 different mage content. The grammar and word choice rules for plural references was not followed in the sentence word choice and formation..

When 2 images are presented, use one paragraph to discuss each image. Each paragraph should focus on only 1 image, report, and idea. That image focus will help with the reporting clarity. The comparison should be mentioned or completed within the trending statement. The reporting paragraphs lack focus because of the combined reporting data. It tends to confuse the reader in terms of information tracking and image relationship. Use as many as 4 paragraphs when dealing with 2 image reports.