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The diagrams presents the changes that have occurred in Queen Mary Hospital since its building



Wiwik Mujahidin 21 / 3  
Apr 10, 2016   #1
The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.


The diagrams presents the changed that have occured in Queen Mary Hospital since its building from 1960 to 2000. Overall, it can be seen that the majority aspects have changed the shopping center and farmland became cancer center over the period.

In 1980, there were several major changes to building in the queen Mary Hospital. A pharmacy has been built beside the hospital changed place of the shopping center. In addtion to this, a cancer center was contructed next to pharmachy in front of main road. Then, the nursing school has built alongside pharmacy and cancer center, was in west of main road.

However, over the following twenty years, there was a significant change of the building, the cancer center expand along side in the left side of the hospital and it was in the behind of pharmacy. Next, the nursing school and park car were in the west of the hospital.


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Anaguna 21 / 26  
Apr 10, 2016   #2
Hi wiwik, I think you have to upload the picture related to the questions. Moreover, here I try to correct the sentence in the introduction.

The diagram (without s) presents the changes that have occurred ...


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