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IELTS The environment problems facing today's world are so great that there is


digitalidea 10 / 11 8  
Jul 15, 2014   #1
The environment problems facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many countries are concerned with the environment problems. There is a viewpoint that the government and big firms should assume the responsibility to protect the environment and normal citizens have nothing to do for that. Personally, I think both government and common people should have the responsibility for the environment, but we need to analyze some specific situations.

On one hand, solving some environmental problems needs large budgets and various technologies, and the government and corporations have the ability to deal with these problems. For example, air pollution and water quality has concerned many countries, and the government is able to implement some policies and invest money to reduce air pollution, while companies also can enhance their technologies to curb emission of contaminated water and substances. However, individuals are unable to cope with these things.

Besides, the government and firms could have significant influences on environmental awareness of people. It is necessary for every citizen to have the awareness and knowledge of environment protection. This means that we should convey corresponding policies and knowledge to the public and society, and the government controls many influential media, such as TV stations and newspapers, which can provide plenty of environmental knowledge and related policies to citizens.

On the other hand, it is possible for ordinary people to participate in some actions of environment protection, and they also can benefit from the improvement of environment. For instance, many people driving private cars could cause air pollution, and overusing plastic packages would affect the environment. If people can gradually change some lifestyles in these daily activities, this will have many significant impacts on environmental improvement.

In conclusion, the government and corporations should take more responsibility for addressing environmental issues, but every citizen also can contribute to the environment.

MisterWandering 18 / 321 130  
Jul 16, 2014   #2
assume the responsibility to protect for protecting

On one hand

On the one hand

solving some environmental problems

and only the government and corporations have the ability to

we should convey

What do you mean by "we" in this sentence?

many people driving private cars could cause air pollution

driving private cars is the main cause of air pollution

change some lifestyles

change their habits

contribute to the environmental protection


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