Good job Pahan - you are making my life easier :D
@ ladyjoy - Follow that structure and it would definitely help you earn marks :D
To my mind, beautifulness of music does not depend on its sorts.In my view, the beauty of music has little to do with its particular type.
'Music is the
nutritionnutrient for our souls'
... the right word is nutrient and not nutrition
Also, the appropriate structure for this task include three parts - Introduction, Body Paragraphs and Conclusion;