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Export destinations of Vietnam's garment and textile industry



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Apr 13, 2025   #1
The table illustrates the primary export destinations of Vietnam's garment and textile industry during the three-year period. The units are measured in million USD.

Overall, USA and Europe were the two major export market of Vietnam's garment and textile industry from 2015 to 2017. Additionally, the other markets including Japan, South Korea, China, Russia and the other market witnessed a steady increase over the period.

Regarding the two markets that started the highest, the USA increased from around 11,000 to 12 ,500, while Europe began at nearly 3,500 and surpassed the USA by twofold in 2017.

Concerning the remaining markets, the undentifined market which iwhich increased slightly by around 500 million USD, reaching 4,953, while the two markets including South Korea and China rose slowly from approximately 2,400 to around 3,000 and grew marginally from nearly 2,000 to around 3,200, respectively. Despite increasing twofold, Russia was still the lowest export location of Vietnam's garment and textile industry.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15612  
Apr 14, 2025   #2
The report is not maximizing the word count allowance to reach a more impressive final score. The simplicity of 158 words means only basic scores can be achieved when the essay may be qualified for a higher score with more words written. The ideal presentation is at least 175 word, but not more than 200 words. I believe that this essay has the potential to achieve that ability. The paragraphs feel under developed and rushed. Use a more intermediate method of English sentence presentation to achieve mid-range scoring considerations. The paragraphs should have at least 3 sentences in them, 5 being the more advised maximum count. It is important to write more, but not overwrite in the task 1 essay to show off your observation, comprehension, and explanation skills.
mosin jack - / 1  
Apr 19, 2025   #3
Thanks for sharing this insightful breakdown! It's impressive to see how Vietnam's garment and textile exports have grown and diversified over the years. The surge in Europe's numbers, even surpassing the USA, really highlights how dynamic global trade can be. It's moments like these that show how data can tell unexpected - and sometimes even funny - stories. Speaking of which, I recently came across some light-hearted content at allfunnyjokes.com/ that made me think about how humor and serious topics can actually go hand in hand. Great post - looking forward to more!


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