Here's How Facebook Actually Won Trump the Presidency

Here's How Facebook Actually Won Trump the Presidency

The CEO of Facebook Mark Zuckerberg hard to convinces the citizens that Facebook had not nefarious role in America election. While, the dicector of Trump Digital said that giant social media had effective to send the information to the voters. Trump's team use Facebook as their cmpaign media. It aim to give information to the societies if spreading hoax issue and inaccurate information about trump and to tackle it. They use twitter as well to promote trump as candidate of USA president. Compare with Clinton, Trump spend more time on social media than television; whereas clinton more like campaign in the televison than social media.

Source: wired

Hi, let me give several advice for you.
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2. the dicector ---> the Director ( miss spelling word)
3.cmpaign ---> campaign

Hi Bambang, I have a few thoughts on your summary essay.

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There you have it Bambang, I hope the above remarks to your revision and for future writing reference, maybe you can add a few more sentences to a summary and go a little bit deeper in understanding the story.