Here's How Facebook Actually Won Trump the Presidency
The CEO of Facebook Mark Zuckerberg hard to convinces the citizens that Facebook had not nefarious role in America election. While, the dicector of Trump Digital said that giant social media had effective to send the information to the voters. Trump's team use Facebook as their cmpaign media. It aim to give information to the societies if spreading hoax issue and inaccurate information about trump and to tackle it. They use twitter as well to promote trump as candidate of USA president. Compare with Clinton, Trump spend more time on social media than television; whereas clinton more like campaign in the televison than social media.
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dicectordirector of Trump Digital (...) media had been effective to send ...
... Facebook as their
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..., Trump spends more time on (...) campaign in the
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Hi please proofread your summary before submitting to this forum. well, it is nice try, i am waiting for your next writing
Hi, let me give several advice for you.
1. The CEO of Facebook(put comma)Mark Zuckerberg (put comma) hard to
convinces (to+V1) the citizens that ...
the dicector ---> the Director ( miss spelling word)
cmpaign ---> campaign
Hi Bambang, I have a few thoughts on your summary essay.
- to convince
s the citizens that Facebook had
notno nefarious role in
-the American election.
- had effectively sent
to send the information
- to the voters.
- Trump's team use Facebook as their ca mpaign media.
- It aimed to give information to the
societies ifsociety who are spreading hoax issues and inaccurate
- as candidate
offor the USA as president.
- Compared with Clinton,
- whereas for Clinton
clinton more like campaign was drawn in the televison than on social media.
There you have it Bambang, I hope the above remarks to your revision and for future writing reference, maybe you can add a few more sentences to a summary and go a little bit deeper in understanding the story.
Hello Bams, let me give my correction for you
Mark Zuckerberg hard to
convincesconvincebecause it is infinitive
societiessocietybecause the society is plural and the societies not correct plural of society