Be friends with ex, agree or disagree

being friends with an ex

One of the views that today's young people do not accept is "being friends with an ex". because it made them both feel awkward and embarrassed; difficult to face friends on both sides. Because of that, people often choose to be strangers rather than friends. Admittedly, being friends with our ex helps us have a friend who knows us better, but it's not a good thing to do. First, being friends with our ex will make it harder for us to open up to our new partner. for example, Binh, my friend, she chose to be friends with her ex after the breakup, making her new lover think that she still loves her ex; so that the two got into an argument, which made her regret being friends with her ex.

Work on learning how to properly use English punctuation marks. You are not using these properly in the statement. You have hanging sentences, misplaced punctuation, and misused punctuation marks. You will be scored on punctuation mark usage regardless of which English test you are planning to take. Therefore, make sure yo pay extra attention to your usage accuracy. For example, you cannot use the connecting word "Because" to start a sentence since there are no 2 connected ideas to link at that point in the presentation. Score downs will happen because of the lack of quality writing, not because you did not write enough words or explain yourself thoroughly. Some basic punctuation errors can lead to a failing score.

I think you did not add in more ideas after the word "First" used to make a sequence, which makes the writing seems inadequate. In addition, you would benefit a lot from using the correct punctuation marks.