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Never, never give up: what a wonderful word



haliuq900207 1 / -  
Nov 17, 2010   #1

Wonderful Word



Oh what a wonderful word. I absolutely agree with it. It's slogan of life. What is the meaning of the saying ? I will share my opinion.

Imagination is unlimited passion. People want to create successful life and, brightness future .So this saying gives us strong courage and passion. When I was a child, I wanted to be a fairy. I used to believe in the fairytales and miracles. As I grow up, I 'm really sure that miracle is only in my hand .I have understood that I'm the owner of my destiny. This saying affected me how to find my way and to fulfill my wish.

Furthermore, it requires us responsibility. My goal, missions and future depend on my responsibility. It demonstrates others who I am. .Being responsibility is the vital for us. My parents trust me so I shouldn't lose my life. They always wish me the best and are proud of me. My success belongs to my family. That's why I'll never, never give up.

Also, it destroys feeling of sorrow. Never ,never give up brings us energy of life and remind us of our goal. A Problem's one kind of gauge. Thereby, we are developing and increasing our knowledge and owing our position. As Time going , we have more experiences and are becoming more powerful and more self confident.

This words help us to evaluate the value of life. Life isn't always lightly and easy. That is why , life requires us more power and aim. Never, never give up that things.

Taniad 4 / 15  
Nov 17, 2010   #2
Personally, I think you have some talents to writing essays, but it hasn't been developed yet.
I suppose you should try to diversify the vocabulary and grammar you used in the essay.
It seems that it's to simple, because of the poor grammar.
But cheer up! I really think you're a gifted person, you just need some time for improving your English.
adex 2 / 9  
Nov 17, 2010   #3
Good jo but you need to check for some errors such It demonstrates to others who I am.
Adilene 1 / 3  
Nov 17, 2010   #4
good text, but I agree with adex, you nee to check for some erros and explain detailed... you need more details ... good luck!!
andygu 6 / 14  
Nov 17, 2010   #5
brightness future
Don't tell about what you think, but what you do,where is the specific example?


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