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The given line graph compares the quantities of three companies' waste output for 15 years



Dinhthy 1 / -  
Oct 3, 2023   #1

the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.



The given line graph compares the quantities of three companies' waste output for 15 years, spanning a period from 2000 to 2015. The unit is measured in tonnes.

Overall, there were significant changes in the amount of waste generated by all three companies depicted on the graph. Companies A and B saw a decrease in waste material, whereas the waste production of Company C rising remarkably.

Company A ranked first in 2000 with 12 tonnes of waste material, followed by Companies B and C with nearly 8 tonnes and approximately 4 tonnes, respectively. Over the subsequent 5 years, the figures for both Companies B and C increased steadily to around 2 tonnes while the waste produced by Company A displayed a downward trend on the graph.

During the next 10 years, only Company C saw a continuous rise in terms of waste generation. In contrast, after reaching a peak at 10 tonnes, Company B's waste output sharply declined to the lowest point. By 2015, Company C's waste material had risen to 10 tonnes and had taken over the first placement from Company A; while the amount of waste produced by Companies A and B had fallen to 8 tonnes and 3 tonnes, respectively.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15383  
Oct 18, 2024   #2
Please be guided regarding the word count when accomplishing the task 1 essay. You should be writing within the 150-200 word limitation given the 20 minute writing allowance for this exam. Since you will be self-timing, you need to be conscious of this fact or you will run out of time to complete the task 2 essay in the manner it should be completed.

Please limit your use of the Oxford comma. It does not help your GRA score in terms of punctuation usage. You are not writing a real mix of simple, complex, and compound sentences, which you would score better by writing, when you use the comma excessively. Try to properly vary your sentence structures instead of constantly trying to connect discussion points in a run-on sentence.


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